Monk Quixote

I’m trying to make the best use of what little time I have available to me during a normal working week. Today I decided that I would like to show non-Arvon folks something from last week, to explain my enthusiasm. So I am sweeping my way back through God’s Cobbler, trying not to re-write, but to tidy dialogue and remove my beloved conditionals from everywhere. And also trying to make all actions post speech from the point of view of the main narrator. No sudden drifts off into someone else’s interior monologue.